Monday, November 17, 2008

"Financial Tsunami" OR Reason No. 258 Why I No Longer Write:

Because I spend my nights correcting things like this:


And here is the "Peer Revision" suggestions for the paper above.


I am not sure changing "crisis" here to "tsunami" really translates, but it is the post-modernists era, so who am I to say . . . ?

Oh, thats right. I'm the teacher.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

OMG, that is horrible writing, wish I could tell you nothing like that happens in college ;-)